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#1 YAN

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Posted 01 October 2011 - 12:59 AM

It was about two weeks ago I came up with this idea. It was going to be posted as a first rough draft so you all could see how my writing process and hopefully I could pick up a few good tips and ideas. Then I got too involved. This is near it's final rough draft now, but I decided to post the first little bit to see how everyone likes it. I think it will get finished one day, but this is pretty much just for you guys.

Notes: The prologue is closest to the original draft as I wrote it early on. The rest has almost been completely rewritten due to a lack of pad/pencils, computer, or recording device. The prologue is told by Tavuro, but I stopped this style of writing because it took way too long and I'm lazy (another reason I never updated the prologue) The story is now written with a third person narration. I am still working on the story so critiques and even speculations are fine. If you ask I will detail the story as best I can, spoiler free.

This is a story about humans, gods, and terrible grammar. If you know this and would still read the prologue and chapter 1 then go ahead. Also don't bother me about the grammar. I'm in a big hurry to do what I can. I may fix it at my leisure. Otherwise please enjoy.

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#2 YAN

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Posted 01 October 2011 - 01:32 AM

Whoops! Forgot chapter 1. So, enjoy chapter 1 now! Crap, these are really long ^^;

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Sorry I couldn't post 2 and 3. I definitely didn't want to post 4 yet, so I won't make any one wait. If you happen to be waiting for more expect it near the end of December or early January.
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