I can finally post my eroge sprites here

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#1 Guest_Lishy_*

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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:01 AM

Hay guys! Looks like I can finally post my eroge sprites by Ghettoyouth here again! In other words, it reached the stage where they are safe for work!

As per usual, WiP:
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Keep in mind all poses will have multiple facial expressions. So what you see here is simply a taste. And please do note clothes are not shaded yet (nor the is midriff accommodated..)

What do you think so far? In particular, I'm worried about the eyebrows..

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#2 Sephora

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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:05 AM

just draw your typical angry japanese eyebrows.

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#3 Kirei

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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:05 AM

Dem boobs. : o

I can still edit my sig, bitches.

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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:06 AM

I'm betting 5 bucks some people here thought I was posting NSFW art :lol:

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#5 Cannoness Quinn

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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:21 AM

The eyebrows and nose could stand to have a touch more definition, but otherwise, this is excellent work. I'm very curious to see where you go with what your making.

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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:25 AM

Mona Sukima Mk.II, on 27 July 2011 - 02:21 AM, said:

The eyebrows and nose could stand to have a touch more definition

Hm? Elaborate, please!

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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:45 AM

Never mind the bit about the nose, it was just the way my laptop was turned. The eyebrows though, I can barely make out the color in them, just a small nondescript line.

A good part of character emotion is discerned from the form of the brow. As it stands now, I have trouble figuring out what she's trying to convey, ) all she needs is just a little touch up imo.

The placement is perfect where they are, the brows just need to be filled out just a bit. Just make them slightly thicker/bolder, and add a little more color to them.

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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:44 PM

not eroge enough

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#9 Guest_Lishy_*

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Posted 31 July 2011 - 03:18 PM

What do you think? We were thinking of giving her a tattoo but it didn't work out so well.

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Posted 31 July 2011 - 03:32 PM

Her boobs seem too far apart and kinda flabby. But that's okay if you are going for a more realistic look, and not picture-perfect 2D wet dream girl.

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Posted 01 August 2011 - 04:03 PM

Raiku, on 31 July 2011 - 03:32 PM, said:

Her boobs seem too far apart and kinda flabby. But that's okay if you are going for a more realistic look, and not picture-perfect 2D wet dream girl.

realistically speaking, they wouldnt look like that.
they wouldnt be so visable through her shirt like that, that you can see the whole shape of the breast. it looks like the shirt is deliberately tucked under her boob because boobs and shirts dont do that

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Posted 01 August 2011 - 04:07 PM

rena, on 01 August 2011 - 04:03 PM, said:

realistically speaking, they wouldnt look like that.
they wouldnt be so visable through her shirt like that, that you can see the whole shape of the breast. it looks like the shirt is deliberately tucked under her boob because boobs and shirts dont do that

ahh, yeah, true. didn't even see that.
unless its some kind of perfectly fitted bra... with frills like that.
but that looks like a top so maybe not.

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Posted 01 August 2011 - 10:03 PM

Another thing I notice, her hair seems to kind of... "flip" in the 3rd one, almost like the sprite was just reversed, even though her head is tilted slightly the other way compared to the 1st and 2nd ones.

That's probably just me though, and I guess it's fine because I'm not sure if it would be harder to draw it as it would look in real life or not.

Though now that I'm looking again, the 1st and 3rd shots seem to be pretty similar except for having one arm raised instead of both, so I'm not sure if you really reversed it and just redrew the body slightly.

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Posted 01 August 2011 - 10:12 PM

rena, on 01 August 2011 - 04:03 PM, said:

realistically speaking, they wouldnt look like that.
they wouldnt be so visable through her shirt like that, that you can see the whole shape of the breast. it looks like the shirt is deliberately tucked under her boob because boobs and shirts dont do that

aaah, that's what it is. I couldn't put my finger on what was making it look weird.

Also, in the first and third portrait, her midriff and below doesn't look like they belong to her torso.

I mean, for the most part, these are still pretty good, but just tidbits here and there that throws it off a bit.

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Posted 01 August 2011 - 11:42 PM

Ooh! You drew that? That's really good!! I don't like eroge games, but it would be cool to make a VN or a game..

(I just realised...the one in the middle looks yandere/yangire-ish!!)

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Posted 01 August 2011 - 11:47 PM

Kadacho, on 01 August 2011 - 11:42 PM, said:

Ooh! You drew that?

Nope. But my partner for the vn did!

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Posted 02 August 2011 - 12:08 AM

Lishy, on 01 August 2011 - 11:47 PM, said:

Nope. But my partner for the vn did!

Then tell him/her that its great!!

Is a VN hard to make?

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Posted 02 August 2011 - 03:11 AM

Kadacho, on 02 August 2011 - 12:08 AM, said:

Then tell him/her that its great!!

Is a VN hard to make?

Very. Visual novels are incredibly difficult to make.

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Posted 02 August 2011 - 09:21 AM

I like the coloring on these a lot, with exception of the random shiny spots on her shoulders. I hate random shiny spots.

Other than that, the only real complaints I have are the random nipple in the third pose and the fact that her top looks like it's bodypainted on top of her boobs. The artist should make the fabric look a bit thicker, IMO.